I feel bad about complaining...
...but I hope you'll read this with an open mind.
Okay. You have talent. That much I'm going to say. But there are a lot of things in here I'm sure you could improve on. Number one: the chord progression. It's probably one of the catchiest out there, but the thing that bugs me about it is that I've heard the exact same one in about three hundred other songs. That is no exaggeration. I think you could put some different notes in there, or at least have some complex chords in there.
Second, you've sidechained the notes from the generic chord progression. Thats all fine and dandy to people who don't care, but for the picky people like me, it's just another thing that blends in with all the other dance tracks. I'm sure you could make that into a harmony and simply have the progression play flat in the background.
Three. I don't reallly like that "come on" voice, it doesn't really fit, but it's fine.
I liked the bell part you put in here, that was one thing I liked. :)
All in all, it's a nice song and everything, but nothing really stands out. Sure, it's got some interesting snare rolls and it's catchy, but so does seventy-five percent of the other dance songs on here.
No doubt people are going to scream at me for this like they did at Karco (who did have good points, he just didn't offer any constructive criticism.) I'll even bet people will rate this as abusive just because I voted a seven, but I really think you should use your talent and make something better. Until then, keep up the work!
-Lamp