Wut?
I'll have you know, O User-of-Presumptuous-Names (referring to the guy below me, in case you couldn't tell) that the rhythm is dang great! At least great for an ambient song. And Djs are supposed to know all about rhythm... >:(
Anyway. :P
Great song here! I like the poem a lot, too. Shame about your ice cream... :( But I didn't cringe at the Slayer, so apparently there are good ways to use it. :) Lovely song, I will download it and play it for my sister all day >:)
-Lamp